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Sometimes I wish I could live in water
When I swim
I escape from the world
The voices muffled
My troubles and worries melt away
Away from reality
Like a blurry dream
Stopping only to catch a breath
I love the way water flows with my body
No gravity
The shimmer of light reflecting off the water
It's a whole new perspective
When I swim
I escape from the world
The voices muffled
My troubles and worries melt away
Away from reality
Like a blurry dream
Stopping only to catch a breath
I love the way water flows with my body
No gravity
The shimmer of light reflecting off the water
It's a whole new perspective
Live in water
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Beautiful. Simply inspiring. You made underwater seem like another world. Another existence in and of itself. One in which you can forget about your problems and simply escape. Something in which I dream of. I love how you make it seem so peaceful and inviting. It makes me wish you could live in water. I guess that's another thing, it's impossible. Which only makes it so much more glamorous and appealing. I liked "Away from reality. Like a blurry dream" I like not only how you described it but how you made it seem so wonderful, but the fact that escaping reality would be magical. And everything flows so beautifully, not a break anywhere. Just simply an amazing piece to read. Thank you for writing this. Bravo.